dwatched
mangul
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like two emerging silent forms
embrasing eachother
in the eternal fire of their souls
they are burning
burning
burning
and only in the infinite space
will such a sublime demostration continue
our most deepest fears
of loneliness and emptiness carry on
our judgement of pilate
our standing on silence
yet in my eyes not everything is lost
like that oblivious flame i see in pain
my hart beats...such a shame
those two forms i used to behold
are now trapped in my screams
are trapped in my soul
embrasing eachother
in the eternal fire of their souls
they are burning
burning
burning
and only in the infinite space
will such a sublime demostration continue
our most deepest fears
of loneliness and emptiness carry on
our judgement of pilate
our standing on silence
yet in my eyes not everything is lost
like that oblivious flame i see in pain
my hart beats...such a shame
those two forms i used to behold
are now trapped in my screams
are trapped in my soul
"No, not that way, you yuppie scumbag...This way!" McCready grabs the guitar, whips it around his head like it was a woodchopper's axe and brings it crashing down in an explosion of splinter. "There, now you try it."
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(and I remember reading it before)
hahaha i don't think it was that beautiful...noone seemed to like itt :(...hahaha it doesn't matters...i like it.... and yes i sent it to you before....
not many people reply...
well there aren't many of us posting, that is part of the reason
I still like your poem even if it gets no replies