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mangulmangul Posts: 25
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
well this one i wrote a long time ago......i liked it alot then and i like it still.....
i owed this one to a person in oregon so.... here it goes......

with a six pack on my hand
and your face on my mind
just as the night goes by
a shooting star went thru the sky
as you did with my hart

seeking in the loneliness
all those feelings about nothing
only gets me nowhere
remindless of a thought

with six empty bottles on the table
i still don't get it
with your face all over me
a tear goes down my cheek

an absorbing fog
is covering my spirit
call me a dog babe
that's how i'm feeling

it's four o clock now girl
ghosts and spirits are roaming down the street
your thought hasn't left my mind, now i'm worrying
i think i'll go mad, give me a gun
i'll do that

angels and querubines
are looking at me tonight...yea they're looking
they are whispering too
you know what are they saying?
they are saying your name

a thousend star points in the sky
a thousend portraits of you in the ceiling
there's not much to loose
a smile a tear that's all

six broken bottles all over my floor
a shattered hart that has become nothing
and i still dont get it
i still dont get why did you do it

you used to be a meaning
you used to be a cause
now i'm trying not to be weak
and not giving away my soul

i'm looking to the perfect infinite
i'm looking at the master of my mind
yet i'm thinking of you
and my thoughts are stronger than my eyes

raul diaz
"No, not that way, you yuppie scumbag...This way!" McCready grabs the guitar, whips it around his head like it was a woodchopper's axe and brings it crashing down in an explosion of splinter. "There, now you try it."
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  • VedderGirl27VedderGirl27 Posts: 69
    Yay! You finally posted it. I love it sweetie! God, I've so been there. Hell, who am I kidding? Still am there. Love really sucks sometimes, huh? I'm thinking about giving up on it.
    There was a whole inside his soul a manicure couldn't fill. So he found himself a whore to love while daisies choked in the windowsill. *JK*
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Very sad, mangul, but I enjoyed it! And VedderGirl27, please don't give up on love! It can push you down in the dirt but it can also be the gentle soul that offers a hand that pulls you from the ground, washes your clothes, bathes you clean and embraces you! If we all give up on love then there will never be any out there to find! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    ... please don't give up on love! It can push you down in the dirt but it can also be the gentle soul that offers a hand that pulls you from the ground, washes your clothes, bathes you clean and embraces you! If we all give up on love then there will never be any out there to find! :)

    just one of millions of reasons that you are one of my favoritest people in the world. :D

    this is a woman who knows what she's talking about!!!!

    not so very long ago veddergirl, i considered giving up - but being enlightened is so very right. a heart such as yours is something that this world could benefit from - please don't hide it away forever.
  • mangulmangul Posts: 25
    Originally posted by VedderGirl27
    Yay! You finally posted it. I love it sweetie! God, I've so been there. Hell, who am I kidding? Still am there. Love really sucks sometimes, huh? I'm thinking about giving up on it.

    glad you liked it :D........nah you're not givin up...even if you decide so, there's always going to be a person that will remind you of how beautiful love is...
    "No, not that way, you yuppie scumbag...This way!" McCready grabs the guitar, whips it around his head like it was a woodchopper's axe and brings it crashing down in an explosion of splinter. "There, now you try it."
  • VedderGirl27VedderGirl27 Posts: 69
    Thank you so much for your kind words, Coleen & Being Enlightened. I don't really wanna give up. I believe in love too much to do that. ( Probably from reading too many Danielle Steel books.)
    I've decided to just put it on hold for a while. I'm not gonna go out of my way to look for it anymore. I think I'll consentrate on my kids & myself for now. And maybe one day, if I'm lucky, love will find me.
    There was a whole inside his soul a manicure couldn't fill. So he found himself a whore to love while daisies choked in the windowsill. *JK*
  • VedderGirl27VedderGirl27 Posts: 69
    Originally posted by mangul
    glad you liked it :D........nah you're not givin up...even if you decide so, there's always going to be a person that will remind you of how beautiful love is...
    You think so, huh? And who would that person be, baby?
    There was a whole inside his soul a manicure couldn't fill. So he found himself a whore to love while daisies choked in the windowsill. *JK*
  • mangulmangul Posts: 25
    Originally posted by VedderGirl27
    You think so, huh? And who would that person be, baby?

    eddie does it all the time :D
    "No, not that way, you yuppie scumbag...This way!" McCready grabs the guitar, whips it around his head like it was a woodchopper's axe and brings it crashing down in an explosion of splinter. "There, now you try it."
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