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weed Posts: 475
edited September 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I have a picture
"writing on the wall"
from a dog-less
dog house
got it when I was
left alone one time
it is now a poster
on a closet wall
Love, Peace
the message it shines
as bright as the sun
to keep me from darkness
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    weed wrote:
    I have a picture
    "writing on the wall"
    from a dog-less
    dog house
    got it when I was
    left alone one time
    it is now a poster
    on a closet wall
    Love, Peace
    the message it shines
    as bright as the sun
    to keep me from darkness


    i like your poem

    vivid
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • weed
    weed Posts: 475
    thank you chadwick
    it is vivid
    white and green
    brightness
  • weed
    weed Posts: 475
    I could have
    lived just fine
    with the way
    things were
    no one knew
    but us
    who needs
    a bunch of freaks
    hanging around anyway ?
  • weed
    weed Posts: 475
    thats right
    freaks
  • weed
    weed Posts: 475
    tears fall
    from bloodshot eyes
    blood pours
    from a cracked heart
  • weed
    weed Posts: 475
    please remember
    how much
    she loves you
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I hope the person you treat this badly never speaks to you again.
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  • weed
    weed Posts: 475
    justam wrote:
    I hope the person you treat this badly never speaks to you again.


    exactly what here
    makes you think
    that I've treated
    someone badly ?

    not one mean thing
    was said
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    weed wrote:
    exactly what here
    makes you think
    that I've treated
    someone badly ?

    not one mean thing
    was said

    Your body of work as a whole has a theme of threats and nastiness and it's just there. Over and over again. That repetition thing. It's yours.

    But, it's none of my business.

    Carry on.
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  • weed
    weed Posts: 475
    justam wrote:
    Your body of work as a whole has a theme of threats and nastiness and it's just there. Over and over again. That repetition thing. It's yours.

    But, it's none of my business.

    Carry on.


    I had to leave someone that I love this morning.
    It might be a while before I will see him again.
    All I did was tell him that I enlarged a picture.
    The picture sheds a bright light that keeps me
    from darkness and a blue chair that he knows about.
    I know that he would smile at everything that was said.
    He knows what it all means.

    No threats or nastiness anywhere.

    and I will carry on
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Please forgive me for intruding. I must be losing my mind. :p:)
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  • walden freeman
    walden freeman Posts: 511
    Yo weed, what is with you kicking so much ass these last couple of weeks?
  • weed
    weed Posts: 475
    walden freeman wrote:
    Yo weed, what is with you kicking so much ass these last couple of weeks?


    you name it dude, . . .
    life, love, work, money, dickheads

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