see how far you get

weedweed Posts: 475
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you're so high on yourself......
I'm gonna harsh your buzz.

go ahead and take that first step......
I'm gonna knock you backwards.

you think that you are playing with a full deck......
but you're a jack off.

you think that you're gonna make a name for yourself......
when I get done your name will be mud.

keep lying.

I can bring you down with a single sentence.
I can bring you down with your own voice.
I can bring you down with your own pen.

I already know the truth...... it will not set you free
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  • madjackmadjack Posts: 213
    I'm already free baby,
    First step taken second in the works,
    Lie steal threaten you've made your bed,
    Shit don't hurt no more my feelings are dead,
    Thought of giving it up for one more try,
    Thought about it but I would rather fuckin die,
    Made my name in 91 in the gulf shit was real,
    Can't steal that girl its a done deal,
    Can't torment with stories and lies,
    Already said my farewell and good-byes,
    Take action cause your words don't bring fear,
    This shit goes in one and out the other ear,
    People know truth you can't hide from it,
    Try living it and give up on the stupid shit,
    Come on and play on the edge of life with me. Its fun and I love every minute of it!!!
  • weedweed Posts: 475
    somebody help this guy find his ignore button.
  • weedweed Posts: 475
    I'll use mine.
  • madjackmadjack Posts: 213
    I'm sorry I thought this was an open fourm where everyone is free to express ideas thoughts and etc. I was only adding my thoughts, I was not trying to be critical of your writing. Again please accept my aplologies.
    Come on and play on the edge of life with me. Its fun and I love every minute of it!!!
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