midnight wine

Hendrix83
Hendrix83 Posts: 26
edited February 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i made love to a bottle of red,
strange ideas spinning in my head,
close your eyes, feel the night,
forget all time, midnight wine.

the stars peirce the sky,
its not sad but still you cry,
the wind touches your face,
ever so gentle and full of grace,
if i die tonight they'll say he lived the life....
well i woke up thismornen and i got myself a beer,
the futures uncertain and the end is always near.
jim morrison
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  • Hendrix83
    Hendrix83 Posts: 26
    Hendrix83 wrote:
    i made love to a bottle of red,
    strange ideas spinning in my head,
    close your eyes, feel the night,
    forget all time, midnight wine.

    the stars peirce the sky,
    its not sad but still you cry,
    the wind touches your face,
    ever so gentle and full of grace,
    if i die tonight it'll be alright....

    ok i think that endings better
    well i woke up thismornen and i got myself a beer,
    the futures uncertain and the end is always near.
    jim morrison
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    how bout...

    if I die tonight
    I didn't go without a fight....hehehheehehheeh :D

    I lik this peom.......I'm so not gonna drink wine anymore....hehehehe....well, two days ain't bad.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    have you heard Lilac Wine by Jeff Buckley.....he died....(so sad).......but not from drinking wine......from jus drinking water!!!!!!!!
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Righteous Jammer
    Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Being a red wine drinker...I loved your poem
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • dontgimmenolip
    dontgimmenolip Posts: 198
    ISN wrote:
    have you heard Lilac Wine by Jeff Buckley.....he died....(so sad).......but not from drinking wine......from jus drinking water!!!!!!!!

    I thought of the exact same thing.
    - Justin

    You think the Slayer tour is out, or what?

    "Finally! I get to save the earth with deadly lasers instead of deadly slide shows." -- Al Gore.

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