midnight wine

Hendrix83

i made love to a bottle of red,
strange ideas spinning in my head,
close your eyes, feel the night,
forget all time, midnight wine.

the stars peirce the sky,
its not sad but still you cry,
the wind touches your face,
ever so gentle and full of grace,
if i die tonight they'll say he lived the life....

Hendrix83

Hendrix83 wrote:

i made love to a bottle of red,
strange ideas spinning in my head,
close your eyes, feel the night,
forget all time, midnight wine.

the stars peirce the sky,
its not sad but still you cry,
the wind touches your face,
ever so gentle and full of grace,
if i die tonight it'll be alright....

ok i think that endings better

ISN

how bout...

if I die tonight
I didn't go without a fight....hehehheehehheeh

I lik this peom.......I'm so not gonna drink wine anymore....hehehehe....well, two days ain't bad.....

ISN

have you heard Lilac Wine by Jeff Buckley.....he died....(so sad).......but not from drinking wine......from jus drinking water!!!!!!!!

Righteous Jammer

Being a red wine drinker...I loved your poem

dontgimmenolip

ISN wrote:

have you heard Lilac Wine by Jeff Buckley.....he died....(so sad).......but not from drinking wine......from jus drinking water!!!!!!!!

I thought of the exact same thing.