just OPEN your mind and ACCEPT it

ExodusExodus Posts: 212
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Saying something you wish you hadn't
or saying nothing and wishing you had
Wondering what hurts more...
wishing i knew...
it's only 7 days till sunday

Hopeless and pathetic ways of life
thinking of how it could have been better
Hating yourself today...
gets worse later.
only 7 days till the end

The end of an era
The end of my sick attempt
Finding out the hard way...
Saying is one thing,
Fighting is another.

It's not always hidden
A message in a bottle.
Why can't it just be simple.
Why can't you see that

It's right there in front of you
just reach out and grab it.
Acceptance is there...
Enlighten me with your will.
Will you please...

but no..
they won't.

They don't wish they had.
They don't care that they havn't.
It all hurts the same.
and here it comes again.
it's only 7 days till Sunday.

and I'm wishing it wasn't.
Between the conception and the creation

Between the emotion and the response

Falls the shadow.
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Comments

  • It's raw but I'm not sure what it's about other than emotion - you've captured the feeling but the message is still a little muddled -
  • ExodusExodus Posts: 212
    man..... don't try to put it in a fucking box....
    just read it and ACCEPT it for what it is....
    if you enjoy it...good...if not...then so be it...
    if shit happens, it happens...thats's all there is to it...
    and thats what i mean.

    to quote the book 1984...
    "...the object of torture is torture, the object of power is power."

    i think it's simple enough.....
    but im really tired.... so im done for tonight..
    c yA
    have a good one
    Between the conception and the creation

    Between the emotion and the response

    Falls the shadow.
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