there goes my life

ExodusExodus Posts: 212
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
freedom
a concept rarely lived.
a short distance from truth.

i walk down the road, through the rain
barefoot and open hearted
feeling every drop of life cover over me
it sets me free.
the black street stains my feet
but i dont care... theres too much
to see, to do
i can feel the sky reaching out to me
and i pour my soul back into it
lifting my arms into the air
tilting my head back and looking to the clouds for words
the cool summer rain runs off my face and through my hair
it speaks to me.
it sets me free...

this is my truth.










i liked this so i put it here.
Between the conception and the creation

Between the emotion and the response

Falls the shadow.
Post edited by Unknown User on

Comments

  • It's alright I suppose.


    Fate is trying to tell you to shut the fuck up
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by Exodus
    the black street satins my feet


    :D satin'd feet
    smell so sweet
    and nevermind the rain :D
    It's all yellow.


  • ExodusExodus Posts: 212
    oop.s....
    it was sposed to say "stains".
    Between the conception and the creation

    Between the emotion and the response

    Falls the shadow.
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