sky black

ExodusExodus Posts: 212
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i wonder
if the sky wasn't there
would i still look up
in hope of seeing a life
i stare...
at the mirror
that turned black and stained my life,
my dreams
all reflected back to me
it's too much to see.
i wonder.... wonder...
and think of all i've done,
all i am.
and if i wasn't there,
would you still look my way
and say to me
all the things i want to hear?
i'll fly to the sun
and hope for the best.
the thing i wanted most is gone.
with all the dreams, all the night.
it's gone.
and i wonder.... wonder...
Between the conception and the creation

Between the emotion and the response

Falls the shadow.
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  • jamitjamit Posts: 49
    i like that expecially the first three lines
    YOU ARE..FAITHFULL, but no TREMOR CHRIST, and there's a DEAD MAN..GIVEN TO FLY

    "I feel the same way about disco as I do herpes" -Hunter S. Thompson
  • ExodusExodus Posts: 212
    thanks...
    it came to me one night when i was coming down from a buzz and contemplating my existence...i think
    Between the conception and the creation

    Between the emotion and the response

    Falls the shadow.
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