good to get out

ExodusExodus Posts: 212
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i could compare
all the things you've done
to everything
all the things you are
the things i want to be
changed
by what we all want
where did we go wrong
nowhere
so where
i have to go
all the days of your life
gone bye
in the blink
of your eyes
darkened as the night
the contents of your life
spread out along the highway
sped through and passed by
ignored....
down to the last
your life in mine
i could compare
what we've done
it's nothing
nothing...











woah, it;'s been a while since i posted stuff on herebre...

sorry fopr the bad spellingg...
jsut spent aprox. 6 hours writing an essay... thats 1/4 of a day.
Between the conception and the creation

Between the emotion and the response

Falls the shadow.
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Comments

  • Don't appologize!!!! :) Thanks for sharing!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • ExodusExodus Posts: 212
    no problem
    Between the conception and the creation

    Between the emotion and the response

    Falls the shadow.
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