i promise this one's better: i said

Exodus

i stopped caring for a minute
just the other day...
made it through ok.
i wanted to see what it was like
with no worries around
not even one sound to ignore
letting the air flow around me
letting the sun shine on me
letting myself get lost in me
and nothing else could be better...
describe to me
what your dreams are like
and every new colour you see
tell me what you think
on all the things i say,
every stupid word that comes out
and if you agree.
that's what it's like to me
i think it makes sense.
but just to be
for one minute of my life
would make it all ok.
everything seems brighter
but i'm afriad of changing
so i'll say this out of time
and hope for you to hear me
even if i can't be there for it
i want you to hear
when i say
goodbye.




(i like this one the best)

myblood2

cant remember the title of the other poem but def better as you say. i like this one a lot.

Exodus

thanks man...
i don't remember the circumstances they were all writte nunder... all i know is that my writing has taken a turn lately...
i don't know what to think of it