one thought

Exodus
Exodus Posts: 212
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Lying in the dark on a friday night
the radio turned up just so lightly,
she whispered in my ear how much it meant.
the soft poetic verse slipped into thin air
and somehow reached her lips.
the song she sang would have lit the room.
thinking of me I said I'm sorry
and her eyes just asked me why
I looked deep into those eyes
those little midnight skies
and said...I'm sorry
it's not enough to be here
it's not enough to give
all the things i could put in
would just crumble in her presence.
i asked her what she thought
she said she wasn't really listening
i said that's ok... that's ok
that's ok by me.
Between the conception and the creation

Between the emotion and the response

Falls the shadow.
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  • Traver DiDiminico
    Traver DiDiminico Posts: 185
    these could be great lyrics to the proper music
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • Buru
    Buru Posts: 8,473
    Originally posted by Traver DiDiminico
    these could be great lyrics to the proper music

    I agree, kind of like a wistful love song
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • Amaterasu
    Amaterasu Posts: 317
    That was great Exodus!!!
  • Exodus
    Exodus Posts: 212
    thanks all for the feedback..
    a lot of the stuff i write is actually intended to be used in the music i write... so it probably will be sooner or later
    Between the conception and the creation

    Between the emotion and the response

    Falls the shadow.

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