old something i found

ExodusExodus Posts: 212
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i just re-found this from a long time ago.


There Goes My Life.

freedom
a concept rarely lived.
a short distance from truth.

i walk down the road, through the rain
barefoot and open hearted
feeling every drop of life cover over me
it sets me free.
the black street stains my feet
but i dont care... theres too much
to see, to do
i can feel the sky reaching out to me
and i pour my soul back into it
lifting my arms into the air
tilting my head back and looking to the clouds for words
the cool summer rain runs off my face and through my hair
it speaks to me.
it sets me free...

this is my truth.
Between the conception and the creation

Between the emotion and the response

Falls the shadow.
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Comments

  • great writing
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • ExodusExodus Posts: 212
    thanks, it's a true story
    Between the conception and the creation

    Between the emotion and the response

    Falls the shadow.
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