regression

ExodusExodus Posts: 212
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
come closer so you can lie to my face
this phone doesn't do justice.
you've been here before you left
and drifting away
come see me and the scars you burned
cigarette smoke and ash stains

remembering the night
where everything could make me cry.
the worst skinned knee
i'm but a boy.
and you were mine.
Between the conception and the creation

Between the emotion and the response

Falls the shadow.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Exodus wrote:
    come closer so you can lie to my face
    this phone doesn't do justice.
    you've been here before you left
    and drifting away
    come see me and the scars you burned
    cigarette smoke and ash stains

    remembering the night
    where everything could make me cry.
    the worst skinned knee
    i'm but a boy.
    and you were mine.
    overwhelmingly intensely beautiful.Beautiful.

    and you were but mine.

    perfect ending.

    this ones definitely a keeper:):):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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