Dive

OttOtt Posts: 403
edited January 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Feelings like flames, consume from within.
Been biting my lip; where do I begin?
You’ve fanned wild fires with your words and your deeds;
Left with no question-I’ve found what I need.
With the sound of the rooster, I’m swimming in you
And as the moon rises, black skies turn to blue.
No doubt it’s a bad time for both you and I,
But I’ve strapped myself in. Let’s enjoy the ride.
No pressure, nor hurry, to take that next leap
Cause once we dive in, the water gets deep.
It covers our bodies and cuts off the air.
In you I sink slowly; no worries, no cares.
So grab onto me, let’s jump off of this cliff.
Wind in our hair, towards the surface we’ll drift.
As the water gets closer, the blue rising fast,
Hold on to me tightly, we’re making a splash.

Ott
'Give me some music; music, moody food/ of us that trade in love'
-Shakespeare
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  • romybianromybian Posts: 1,644
    Ott wrote:
    Feelings like flames, consume from within.
    Been biting my lip; where do I begin?
    You’ve fanned wild fires with your words and your deeds;
    Left with no question-I’ve found what I need.
    With the sound of the rooster, I’m swimming in you
    And as the moon rises, black skies turn to blue.
    No doubt it’s a bad time for both you and I,
    But I’ve strapped myself in. Let’s enjoy the ride.
    No pressure, nor hurry, to take that next leap
    Cause once we dive in, the water gets deep.
    It covers our bodies and cuts off the air.
    In you I sink slowly; no worries, no cares.
    So grab onto me, let’s jump off of this cliff.
    Wind in our hair, towards the surface we’ll drift.
    As the water gets closer, the blue rising fast,
    Hold on to me tightly, we’re making a splash.

    Ott
    I love this one
    "The joke in your language won't come out the same" (Tom Petty)
    I'm no dude! Dudette!
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    It is very nice! :)
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