just something

2ndhandriot2ndhandriot Posts: 9
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
this is my last plea
for all of me is almost gone
i can feel it slowly leaking
slowly falling to pieces
i can feel it in my soul
i can feel it in my bones
everything is missing
all feeling is now gone
so once more i take your hand
ask for your help
but now that you are gone what is next
do i walk alone
or fall apart
so i look for some of you in me
some small part of you left
anything to keep me sain
as i crawl through each and every memory
seeing each and ever time
I know all the words you said
and reacalling all of the times..
i could have cryed
..i should have cryed
even if your gone thank you
for helping me stay strong
even if your gone i still love you
and still need you
i will always miss you
so thank you




i ushually dont write so its probly not that great
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  • Every poem has a message to it.You are obviously heart broken,and it was a touching poem.Thanks for sharing it.
    once you know
    you can never go back...
  • Amen. That was really touching.
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    "The live shows? Well, that's church on Sundays"
  • i forgeti forget Posts: 281
    Originally posted by Inside|The|Well
    Amen. That was really touching.
    Nice sig!
  • Spent her whole life
    Disbelieving her worst fears.
    A work of art...
    A work of art.

    ^^^^^^^^^^^
    This old thing? LOL
    20-04-2006 04-09-2006 05-09-2006 11-09-2006 16-09-2006 17-09-2006 18-06-2007 21-06-2007 26-06-2007 28-06-2007 17-08-2009 20-05-2010 21-05-2010

    "The live shows? Well, that's church on Sundays"
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    that was a great poem.........makes me sad.....:(
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