tell me what u think

2ndhandriot

i wrote this for my band so i need to know what u think and be honest

dont you see me
sittin on main street
smellin of cheep beer and ciaretts
sleepin away life
watin till deth
i guess there isnt any more reason to live
just to see what time i have
talk away..
sleep away..
dream away..
what all does it matter anyway
keep all other life away
ive got just enuf it hide
just sittin here
inside my radio
watching life go past
as they edit everything in free range
seeing all the empty signs
life is nothing but whats in our minds
endless meaningless
we all suffer the same fate
there is deth..then..
everything else is fationed in pain
wraped in gods synthetic evil
there is no safe place to hide away
not even the mind for most
but i will sit her self content
knowing only one small thing
i still have my music
music they cant take
it will always be in my mind
something some mite hate
but not something they can take
i know im not alone
for all there are many like me
who dream away
atleast for musics sake

BhagavadGita

good song for those who invent fantasy friends because they have no real ones of their own.

sounds like a top 10.

Exodus

honestly it depends on what kind of music/song it is and how its being sung.
in todays music scene theres not much room for rock but on paper/screen that looks good... somethings might be able to get edited out...but thats your choice....
if you're happy with it... thats all that matter anyway