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be a memory (fuck off)

LinaMarquezLinaMarquez Posts: 18
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Be gone, be foam
Be exempt from this bond
Be chalk smeared on stone
Be paper, rubber, coal
Be a memory, just that
Be a stain, just that

And when you comeback
And say to me baby
Forget what’s behind
And open up your heart’s blinds
I will say
I will say

Be a picture on the wall
Be a burn on my tongue
Be a bear on a shelf
Stay away from my veins
Be a memory, just that
Be a stain, just that

And when you comeback
And say to me baby
Forget what’s behind
And open up your heart’s blinds
I will say
I will say

Go travel her hair
And choke on her melons
Go suck her dark smile
And blend with her a night
While I start a new life

And when you comeback
And say to me baby
Forget what’s behind
And open up your heart’s blinds
I will say
I will say

Be gone, be foam, become
a stain on the floor

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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    excellent! it's very much like a song and i dig it. thanks!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    this is really good.
    reminds me of a time in my life when that was what I felt though I did go back to him a couple times. :o
    but now I just don't care.

    thank you very much for sharing this. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • pinonpinon Posts: 427
    ha...yes...that is exellent!!! Love it :)
    Life is too serious to be taken seriously
  • LinaMarquezLinaMarquez Posts: 18
    thanks for taking the time to read it. it is actually a song. it's upbeat. when i play this song (at coffee shops) people respond well to it.

    thank you
    http://www.linamusic.com
  • pinonpinon Posts: 427
    will it be up in the sound-section of your site later on ?
    would love to hear it :)
    Life is too serious to be taken seriously
  • LinaMarquezLinaMarquez Posts: 18
    of course it will be.
    thanks
    http://www.linamusic.com
  • pinonpinon Posts: 427
    great, looking forward to that :)

    lol...a classic already, if you ask me :

    "Be gone, be foam, become
    a stain on the floor"

    :D
    Life is too serious to be taken seriously
  • LinaMarquezLinaMarquez Posts: 18
    can i add your email to my mailing list?
    i want to let you know when i upload this song.
    http://www.linamusic.com
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    ha, i especially like the title
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • pinonpinon Posts: 427
    LinaMarquez wrote:
    can i add your email to my mailing list?
    i want to let you know when i upload this song.

    yes sure....thx :)
    Life is too serious to be taken seriously
  • LinaMarquezLinaMarquez Posts: 18
    cool!
    thanks
    http://www.linamusic.com
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Enjoyable lyrics, LinaMarquez! I also enjoyed "why". :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • LinaMarquezLinaMarquez Posts: 18
    thanks for taking the time
    http://www.linamusic.com
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