life of gloom

SoLATisA

i've that feeling running through my veins....
the one i can't define or quite explain...
it creeps from somewhere that is beyond pain...
i might have sold my soul when i entered the love-game...

you've been saying all along,
that it would lead to this... life of gloom...
there's only one true thing,
and i can't find....
please escape me,
undefine....

i heard you're not so well,
since you've gone off...
you're not ready for it yet,
and to top it off...
you owe everyone,
everyone owe's you...
making it all okay,
only makes it worse

you've been saying all this time,
that it would lead to this.... life of gloom
there's only one true thing,
and i can't find.....
please escape me,
undefine....


and fall,
when will we try it all?
shifting in the wind,
some light, some place beings....
falling back in stride,
when will you lose your chace?
charing, finding all....
sunset takes the sky.....

ForeverAJammer

i really liked this solatisa...i like how u chose ure words, everything played into the line above it beautifully keep it up:)

Buru

loved this, Solatisa
good writing!!
there are certain parts I love:

please escape me...
undefine...

you've been saying all along,
that it would lead to this... life of gloom...

Schlitz

:(

of_the_girl

this is lovely...

please smile.

rarghrargh-brownstar

solat is the king

pjsal

Originally posted by of_the_girl
this is lovely...

please smile.

Yes, it is lovely writing...
but you youngin's ain't lived long enough to have a "life of gloom" yet---you're just gettin' started!!!
It gets better.