but what about the afternoons?

SoLATisA

the light that bends under the door
lights up the room, can't see the source
the oven that has failed to cook so well
that place i know all too well
only have recieved and never have gived
i'm not sure now, i see you lived
i can tell you, in given time
although just lately, can't make good time
to get the words back into line
going down the road, can't stop on a dime
to know this one, until the end of time
forgiveness for the bruises, i'll show you mine
it's wrong of you to buy the ad
it's wrong of me to be so bad
the cancer's in my body
everyday
won't let you forgete, won't go away
i see continuance, i want that fast
widgets work they'll mend your pants
as for me
it's hard to say
this cloud, the forever, the night the day

tremorvoid

did you write that or is it a song??

suede

"gived" is not a word

tremorvoid

Originally posted by suede
"gived" is not a word

if its his poetry he can make up whatever words he wants to make up......

you write something...its not easy

ISN

I gived all along the watchtower....hehehehehe....then I had a nice lunch of sandwiches....and some coffee from my flask....and then I gived my crumbles to the birdebsssssssssss......

tremorvoid

i thought it was nice josh.....

suede

I think it's cool, too! I only stated that "gived" is not a word; I didn't say I thought it was crap. You can't make up words...that would be a traveshamockery
Well, Humpty Hump uses a word that don't mean nothin', like looptid.

ISN

ur crazeeeeeeeeeshmoiloidy

tremorvoid

im too tired to try and make up a word that beats traveshamockery ......so im going to bed.....

ISN

you're riggetelyrighotedlyright.....there isn't a boiter word than travashamockery......unless it's shamhamramrockery....