Poetry is . . .

Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Dante said, "Poetry is things that are true expressed in words that are beatiful."

Samual Johnson said, "Poetry is the art of uniting pleasure with truth by calling imagination to the help of reason."

Samual Taylor Coleridge said, "Poetry is the best words in the best order."

William Wordsworth said, "Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings."

Robert Frost said, "Poetry is a way of remembering what it would impoverish us to forget."

Emily Dickinson said, "If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that it is poetry."

W.H. Auden said, "Poetry is the clear expression of mixed feelings."

Elizabeth Bishop said, "Poetry is hundreds of things coming together at the right moment."

Gwendolyn Brooks said, "Poetry is life distilled."

Mina Loy said, "Poetry is prose bewitched."




And I ask you, dear jammers and poem hammerers, what is poetry to you? Why write it? Why carve it? Why serve it on virgin silver and lay it on the porch just to see what creature sniffs and drools and bites?
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  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    It is emptying a brain that is getting to full. Slowly I start pulling the rope that is attached to the pail. In that pail are some kind of thoughts that are just wanting to be put on paper. Unfortunately some of the thoughts leak out of the pail on its way up. For if that damn pail could stay full just for one dipping and emptying. I, yes I, would surely have a ton of thoughts worthy of a book too. Alas my pail just like Georgie's has a hole in it.
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • well said, e.f.
  • The ephemeral essence of what makes life matter, captured in words, or rather an attempt to capture a dust devil in a jar, put it on a shelf, and watch it spin forever....
    ~all is full of love~
  • Or is that dirt devil? Either way, they're fun when they splash and smear and land in your ear and tell you to write tenaciously.
  • http://www.epinions.com/content_36102114948

    "Outside the Law (What Makes Us Feel Good)"

    Poetry is not supposed to rhyme.
    Poetry is not supposed to be about dragons and rainbows.
    Poetry is about spilling your raw emotions into the open air so they can be oxidized into words.
    Poetry is not being afraid to spit in the face of the traditional rhyme,
    the traditional rainbows,
    and love
    and life
    and other things that tragically tend to go wrong.
    Poetry doesn't cover up what is inside simply because what is inside may not make children giggle or 2nd grade teachers buy paperbacks en masse from Schoolastic.
    Poetry explodes with a vibrant display of passion or an oppressive veil of death.
    Poetry cannot be contained by what makes us feel good.

    Poetry is not for us.
    Poetry is for them.
    It is for you.
    It is for whomever decides to pick up a pen, a keyboard, a piece of chalk, a crayon, or a bleeding finger
    and scrawl across some medium the essence of what makes him HUMAN
    and ALIVE.

    Our daily existence cannot be packaged nicely into a sweet chocolate shell like some 3-cent toy in a KinderEgg.
    There is rot that must be expelled.
    There are epidemics picking off our friends.
    The guy who sold you tomatoes last week was stabbed to death in an alleyway last night for 23 bucks and half a pack of cigarettes.
    The world is not pretty.
    The world is not fairy tales with princesses and dragons and a set rhyme scheme and iambic pentameter.
    Order is not an option.

    There is no need for fluffy puppy dogs and dragons;
    love at first sight;
    dew drops on rose petals.
    That sunshine can be blown up your ass on Sesame Street
    or Poetry Dot Com.
    This is the real thing, folks
    This is the stuff that makes us tick,
    that's on our minds.
    This is the world as seen without our bullet-proof rose-colored glasses
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  • "Poetry is the Art of Self Destruction"

    Poetry is the art of self destruction
    A crafty guise of thought creation
    Stretched tightly over degeneration

    Pleas strung together
    like bows on a cartoon kite string
    Just subtle enough to worry the ones
    who have too much to worry about already

    It's a means to your end
    that might leave a thumbprint
    on college English profs in their
    "Twisted Bleeding Suicide Hearts" club

    It's a way to realize everything
    you've never allowed
    An excuse
    Poets aren't supposed to be happy
    because true poets all know
    happy poems
    are as revealing
    as faked orgasms and bottle tans

    Poetry is the self destruction
    of the pathological meat eaters
    tearing flesh from the little man inside
    and chewing and swallowing and excreting
    Poetry is a hand twitch misconstrued as insight

    Poetry as self destruction
    is an invisible art
    when properly executed
    A subtle call for the death of the meat eaters
    Somebody drop a fucking A-bomb!

    Poetry is the nest of cock roaches
    we all overlooked
    and forgot
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  • Both scrawled in a pretty miserable time of my life when poetry was my only means of expulsion.

    I've expanded my definitinon a little beyond that. :)
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  • My butt hurts. I think my ass has been kicked. Thanks for the foot CranMalReign :)
  • Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    My butt hurts. I think my ass has been kicked. Thanks for the foot CranMalReign :)

    No prob, mah man. Just saw this post and those two "offerings" sprung to mind. Didn't mean to put a damper on the whole thread. Like I said, I'm in a much better mood nowadays. ;)
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    um so explain to me why you haven't posted more poetry here cranmal?

    please, i'd like some more.
  • Originally posted by CranMalReign
    No prob, mah man. Just saw this post and those two "offerings" sprung to mind. Didn't mean to put a damper on the whole thread. Like I said, I'm in a much better mood nowadays. ;)

    Cool. Did you write the review for the "Outlaw Book" too? Are you included in it?

    You haven't dampered or dampened or dammed this thread. So far, all three responses of "What Poetry Is" are pretty similiar. They seem to be explosions of emotions. Whether those emotions are Love, Hate, Revenge, Disgust, Admiration, Constipation, or Revelation is what makes poetry poetic, I think.

    BTW your name sounds like Chinese food. hehe
  • Originally posted by coleen
    um so explain to me why you haven't posted more poetry here cranmal?

    please, i'd like some more.

    I've often had the desire to post some stuff here. Never felt comfortable initiating though. But this topic just seemed like one I couldn't pass up.

    Perhaps I'll put a few more in here and there. I'm glad it's appreciated.
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  • Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Cool. Did you write the review for the "Outlaw Book" too? Are you included in it?


    Yah, I wrote that review. There was another review on there which really pissed me off. So my review was more of a retort to that tunnelvisioned review. Then I removed the censors and updated my review a little bit for my private purposes, since I had to edit myself for epinions.

    And actually, CranMalReign is just a completely random name I came up with when I got banned from a message board for using "Nippleskin". I wonder if it has anything to do with the Cranberry Mall where I worked at the time?
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    I've often had the desire to post some stuff here. Never felt comfortable initiating though. But this topic just seemed like one I couldn't pass up.

    Perhaps I'll put a few more in here and there. I'm glad it's appreciated.

    i understand because i felt the same way myself. mind you i am not at the level as the rest of you but everyone here is very supportive and encouraging.

    i really do hope you'll decide to share more with us in the future that was just some truly incredible work you laid on us. :)
  • Originally posted by coleen
    i understand because i felt the same way myself. mind you i am not at the level as the rest of you but everyone here is very supportive and encouraging.

    i really do hope you'll decide to share more with us in the future that was just some truly incredible work you laid on us. :)

    Well, I'll keep a closer eye on this forum then, and contribute when I feel appropriate and comfortable. Keep a look out for me. ;)
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  • Originally posted by coleen
    i understand because i felt the same way myself.

    Yeah, happy phantom!
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    I'll take the emotive concept just a step further in saying that poetry is the literal metaphor for humanity.

    When I write, it is all the things I would have said if I had the voice to do so. It is why no matter how many times I read my work, in my head it always sounds so correct, so apropos, though my voice cannot inflect the ennui that I propose.

    I dream on the page. I fret, I nag, I worry the words as they go. Occasionally they burst furth as a supernova of lingual froth and I can barely control the pen or the typing hand, and it is they who hold the leash merely allowing me the sway as I sniff in the breeze. You have heard me say it before: I bleed.

    Poetry is what all people would have said. There are people who read what we say and write and dream and do and say to themselves "why can I not do that? what is missing from me?" It is the quiet voice you must watch.

    Poetry is self knowledge, however deprecating or even arrogant, it is true self on a page... if one is being honest. I believe false poetry to be easily seen from a distance and is therefore quickly discarded on approach.

    Poets are artists in a window with glass planed through the soul.

    Poetry is courage of word, thoughts that stay, opinions that may only matter briefly but to be remembered as long as the letters don't fade. Poetry is the art of realtime progression, a plotline that regards structure as a foundry, though limiting, and metaphor the freeing of caged captivity. Words are never as they seem and poetry is therefore proof that magic can exist.

    People have asked me what I would do if all other things were taken from me...

    I would write.

    Yes, they say, but what if your writing was taken from you or lost?

    I would die.

    Poetry is my insanity on spread, my sanity enthralled. I am merely the conduit, the paper the lodestone, and all things flow through me. There is a force that contends me to write, compells me, to the point of wordlessness. I tend to babble, I am doing so now.

    Poetry is and are the things I always wanted to say. I can tell someone that I love them better in a diary than I can in real life. I can relate fear or anticipation better on paper than in any ordinary conversation.

    Oh there are the certain individuals, rare but true, that allow me to vent verbally as I do on the page, but I tend to get the wide-eyed-holy-shit-look-of-freak from most folks who hear me in such a state. I feel ashamed, as if I have been caught masturbating in public and then I feel angry because someone shat upon the thoughts that mean so much to me. Poetry is, therefore, self verification. These thoughts are mine and I share them because I feel that since they affect me so profoundly, there are times when my chest hurts I feel them so, that others MUST know, MUST be told. I cannot help it. It is my calling.

    If ever I lost my hands, I would truly invent telepathy.

    I now have the burn, I can feel the pain in my heart and the rise of the blood pressure as my mind seeks to find the volcanic plug and reduce it to ash here and now. I could go for days. I have gone for days.

    This place... to find receptive eyes for the words that come to mine... I don't know what I would have done without it. I have written some of my best work in honor of those on this board and many times with the thought, admittedly, of trying desperately to blow people's minds, mine included. I wanted to write better than I ever have, say more things and mean more things than I ever have...

    Funny thing is, I don't know if I've succeeded or not. I am very particular and sooner or later I may look at this work I've done and say to myself, it could have been better.

    Even if it was all for love.

    LOL Poetry is frustration. This, here, all of us, you, me, we go outside and smell the world, those cracks in the sidewalks you can feel if you concentrate, right through your shoes... the ability to watch someone from across the room and KNOW them, make love to them with your mind... stepping aside on the sidewalk as someone approaches and knowing that the rest of your day may forever be altered because of it...

    I cannot... I don't....

    It's all poetry. Every last drop. And I suppose this was my page on which to breathe.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Originally posted by coleen
    mind you i am not at the level as the rest of you

    Two words: Pish Posh.
  • Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Yeah, happy phantom!

    I saw that. ;)
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  • Originally posted by CranMalReign
    I got banned from a message board for using "Nippleskin".

    I assure you, with some of the shit we post around here, Tickle Me Elmo could say "You're my Nippleskin friend" and no one would flinch.
  • Originally posted by setaside2
    Poetry is what all people would have said.
    ...
    If ever I lost my hands, I would truly invent telepathy.

    Genius. This whole passage was exactly what poetry is to me.

    Thank you.
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Two words: Pish Posh.

    see what i mean cranmal?

    they are very supportive and encouraging. no judgements, no ridicule - although on ocassion there have been the threat of spankings thrown about. :)
  • Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    I assure you, with some of the shit we post around here, Tickle Me Elmo could say "You're my Nippleskin friend" and no one would flinch.

    Of course not. I am his Nippleskin friend. pshaw!
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  • Originally posted by setaside2
    I feel ashamed, as if I have been caught masturbating in public

    It's really not that embarrassing.

    seta, as always, I delight at seeing your light flicker. I would say more, but then that wouldn't be me. ;)
  • Originally posted by coleen
    they are very supportive and encouraging.

    That is the stupidest thing I have ever read.









































    :D
  • Originally posted by CranMalReign
    Of course not. I am his Nippleskin friend. pshaw!

    So when you laugh, does milk come out your nipples?
  • Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    So when you laugh, does milk come out your nipples?

    I'll hafta get to know you better before I divulge that. ;)
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  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    we can either discuss the veracity and possible vitriol surrounding NIPPLESKIN or we can see who else thinks poetry is what.

    Post it here. I'm curious.

    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • i must admit i have not been able to keep up the frantic pace i was writing several weeks back, at the dark beginning of this wonderfual adventure.. i am non medicated now and feel my sex chakra spinning out of control so me thinks til i get some real monkey dick, i may be slightly distracted but poetry in the beginning was to me like

    throwing up on a strangers shoes, a really really cute and talented strangers shoes.



















































    although his big red shoes were full of head cheese so who knew!
  • Originally posted by setaside2
    we can either discuss the veracity and possible vitriol surrounding NIPPLESKIN or we can see who else thinks poetry is what.

    Post it here. I'm curious.

    seta
    Poetry, like a nipple, is a little pointy island surrounded by skin. On this nipple lives the poet. He has pink feet and is scared to step on the cream or chocolate skin that hems him in because his feet might leave pinkish footprints all over the nice umblemished skin. He doesn't like dirty things, so he sits quietly and plays with his pointy thing all the time. However, he learns (whether through divination or vibration or sensation) that another Pink Person lives on the other side of the Great Chest Valley of Hair. He wants desperately to make contact to this other person because she is just like him, he knows it, he feels it, he tastes sad moth wings because of it. He stretches himself as far as he can, but still cannot reach the other Pink Person. All this damn flesh is a fuss. So he decides one midnight to brave the flesh. He takes a cautious step. He doesn't sink. He doesn't stink. There are no footprints. There are no strangers. Just skin and longing and emerging urgings. He looks back at the comfortable and miserable island he just left and wonders why he was scared in the first place. Never be scared to step. Never be scared to connect. Poetry steps. Poetry connects.

    And the two Pink Persons met just beyond the Great Chest Valley of Hair and lived happily ever after. Right over the heart.
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