my scribbles

xmascleanlovexmascleanlove Posts: 55
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
shadows fall where her body lays
the brightest parts of darkest days
looking past all the mirrors cracked

one more picture
wasting good paint

covers cover up the scars
lies have carved into plastic hearts
left with fate she chooses to stay

as another end
begins to start

tears ment to tear her up...pick apart her thoughts on love...tears ment to tear her up...make her smile just for fun...tears ment to burn her up...set afire all her trust...tears ment to say a name...freeze and die...

useless on her face.
if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
~ EV 6/25/03
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  • these little sins laced with carcinogens
    don't ever want to be
    what you want to be
    take back every kiss you're ever gonna give
    cause they refuse to be
    what they have to be
    chalkboard for a face i'd like to erase
    would never wanna be
    what you want to be


    you know me
    halo to tail
    heartbeats in heaven
    bars on a cell
    i don't know me
    never will
    not much of a life
    to live for the kill


    gold robbed these veins made when he came
    that's the truth
    i'm just like you
    one last resort is to import
    in full is paid
    the debt due
    not one more try or last time
    been robbed enough
    of a short youth


    you know me
    halo to tail
    heartbeats in heaven
    bars on a cell
    i don't know me
    never will
    not much of a life
    to live for the kill


    ......biggestdicksgetthebiggestdicksbiggestdicksgetthebiggestdicks.......
    if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
    ~ EV 6/25/03
  • "a lullaby for the sheep"


    dreams are like sugar in a world full of salt
    where everyone leaves but it's nobodies fault
    nobodies good for more than hate
    god only knows how long it all takes

    this is a lullaby without love
    gotta believe dreams are enough
    this is a lullaby without love
    all the safe places ever made up (this would be the chorus)

    faith in an angel leads to sleep
    and in her wings she placed a...soul to keep
    fly it somewhere to hide from the sun
    where it feels wanted until it wakes up

    keep searching for a kiss that's not fake
    just one real reason to stay awake
    see just enough to want to go blind
    learn how to cry without using your eyes
    if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
    ~ EV 6/25/03
  • "mugsy" (a song dedicated to my dog)

    i wish i were my dog
    wouldn't have to run away
    i'd lay around and sleep
    lick myself all day

    piss on the policemen
    shit in their front yards
    snuggle with the pretty chics
    and chase a couple cars


    goddamn...it'd be fun...to be a dog

    cos puppies don't have homework
    they just get to play
    takes a lot less beer to get fucked up
    and less weed to get baked

    i'd chase my tail forever
    wouldn't have a boss
    sniff or bite everyone
    depending on the crouch

    goddamn...it'd be fun...to be a dog

    bark a few fuck you's
    when asked to do tricks
    scratch behind my ears
    to kill the fleas and ticks

    wouldn't pay no taxes
    wouldn't have to talk
    so kiss my furry ass
    and lets go for a walk

    goddamn...it'd be fun...to be a dog
    if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
    ~ EV 6/25/03
  • Originally posted by xmascleanlove
    you know me
    halo to tail

    I really dig these lines alot! I actually relate to them rather well!
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  • this is a good poetry thread except for the sprit of yuck


    remember jesus paid the debt a long time ago
    whenever you start thinking that you life ends by your own hands that is satan calling you and at that point you need to fall down on you hands and knees and give your tears and your soul to the sprit of you creator

    in jesus name
    amen
  • what the hell...could someone give me some feedback...as long as your not a few sandwhiches short of a picnic like the dude above me
    if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
    ~ EV 6/25/03
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    i don't know how i missed this thread yesterday but i have to agree with cran mal on "you know me halo to tail" what a great line in a thread full of great lines.

    i also liked the line "dreams are like sugar in a world full of salt" and enjoyed all the pieces you posted.
  • Originally posted by coleen
    i also liked the line "dreams are like sugar in a world full of salt" and enjoyed all the pieces you posted.

    Word. Forgot about those lines. I found them remarkable too... yet failed to remark on them. :)
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    • 00 Pgh
    • 03 Pgh|Philly|PSU|Camden 1+2|Hershey
    • 04 Boston 1|Reading
    • 05 Philly
    • 06 Camden 1+2|Pgh
    • 08 Camden 1+2|Hartford|Mansfield 2
    • 09 Philly 1 [EV]|Toronto|Spectrum 1-4
    • 10 Cleveland|Buffalo
    • 11 Philly [EV]|PJ20
    • 12 Philly
    • 13 London|Pgh|Buff|Philly 1+2|Balt
    • 14 Cincy|StL
    • 16 Philly 1+2|Philly 2 [TotD]
    • 18 Boston 1+2
  • thanks you two...but what about the mugsy song about my dog...that was inspired by soon forget...as i went out and bought a uke and came up with it
    if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
    ~ EV 6/25/03
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