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xmascleanlovexmascleanlove Posts: 55
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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i have baby hamsters
we're not into that buddhist monk
lifestyle

i'd like to publicly announce
they're up for adoption
to loving parents
and good homes

lounge in my boxers
writing at breakneck speed
about nothing important

land of the brave
home of the free

thought i knew women
my face never slapped
but something
came out
in a poem yesterday

so i vowed to quit with that
sissy shit

college basketball was more fun
anyways

than say wearing haiku's on
my shoes to
slip on ego-drenched opinion

not propping
that cross
up yet

wal-papering rejections
just to drive me mad
acceptance letter
heavensent
know now i'll never see

home of the brave
land of the free
if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
~ EV 6/25/03
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  • xmascleanlovexmascleanlove Posts: 55
    annual vacation recollections

    the fireflies
    simply stunning
    dancing
    in this chainsaw ballet

    with thunder as a soundtrack
    humid sand hugged onto knee

    as if by whimsy
    night
    where sky cried lightning

    turned magnetic
    imprinting itself upon our lives

    a salty-aired occurence
    and a face
    full
    of new lines

    these moments make lips worth kissing
    and said kissed lips crack smiles
    like a rose blossoms
    enchant
    sustained with sunlight

    parents grew old
    we grew up
    time helps us shrink away

    wither us
    carolina sun
    call us back like pawns
    in a drawish four knights game

    surfing memories
    as if
    they were but waves
    if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
    ~ EV 6/25/03
  • xmascleanlovexmascleanlove Posts: 55
    a distraction from sadness

    name me a saint of lightning storms
    purple villain
    of meteor showers

    rivals in cosmic events
    ruled
    by the stars

    tale-influencing
    like butterfly wings
    flutter

    singing angels swallowed
    in a violent supernova

    darkness
    ruled by golden silence

    for i shall team with thunder
    shake souls until
    they tremble
    to their dirty core!

    quoth the raven
    "nevermore!"
    if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
    ~ EV 6/25/03
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Originally posted by xmascleanlove

    quoth the raven
    "nevermore!"


    you know, none of the raven clans out here will say this for me. And I've tried nearly everything. bastard arrogant CROWS is what they is.

    otherWISE...

    I like this bunch here. Especially the last one but they are all effectual pieces. Dig.

    thanks.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • xmascleanlovexmascleanlove Posts: 55
    i didn't think they sucked so bad as to warrant no opinions...jeeze
    if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
    ~ EV 6/25/03
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    I liked them all and loved the last one.

    :)
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