Kara

xmascleanlovexmascleanlove Posts: 55
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i'm starting to try writing songs...i dunno...this one seems too cookie cutter or cheesy or something...but what do you think?


Young enough that mistakes don’t count
Just twist our hearts till the stains come out
I’m afraid I’d be a whore
If I’d given you…anymore
Of me

And the lips you kissed that I can’t forget
Did you pretend that mine were his
I miss the way you missed me
I loved the way you loved

Kara please stay in the past
You’d never want what you left
For all the times you did come back
Know you kept me breathing

Believing in love

We’re a masterpiece between the sheets
Lift the covers to uncover you sweet
I’m afraid…nothing more
Afraid I’ve become a bore

Of all the lips I’ve ever kissed it seems as if
It’s yours I just can’t forget
I still miss the way you missed me
I’ll always love the way you’d love
if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
~ EV 6/25/03
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Comments

  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    I like it.
    me thinks it's sweet.
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    that's what I call "a nice debut"
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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