psycho (101)

Medicated-GeniusMedicated-Genius Posts: 359
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
one two three four five
once I caught a girl alive
six seven eight nine ten
i took her to the lions den

her mother was broken
her father was dead
being a psych
i fucked with her head

too young to know
i had a motive in me
i showed her my kinda love
knew she wouldnt see






was it a purposeful deliberate inevitable accident? had all the tricks and all

the training and all the knowledge in the world to manipulate and make her

mine,disagree in theory with it because I see it all the time, people come

through my door to say oh my god look what happened to me,my words cultivated to

soothe,.........there is no reason for this! it wasnt your fault and you know

what said fred? you know what? the rules dont apply to me cause it's different

and i love her....... freaky twisted phsychologial advantage able to bend and

morph and make her believe it was her all along, but she's just a child and i

refuse to see cause i want it i want her and it makes me feel good makes me feel

fine, so no rules apply to me, i will offer her shelter and give her my room and

feed her and clothe her and be her goddamn hero and then i will strike too late

it's done she is mine now, i will protect her from everyone who would take her,

guard her and keep her mind in my prison and no one not no one not ever at all

will hurt her, except me.


dont you just fucking love the way i can get on my high horse and agree with you

because i know it's what you want to hear and the laws that govern you and her

just dont govern me.


her mother was broken
her father was dead
since i'm a psych
i easily fucked with her head.
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  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    i think i know you.

    you're in my dreams, seducing and capturing everything that ever meant anything decent, moral or good.

    you're in my veins, melting and blending with gland-pumped chemicals meant only for survival mode, fleeing and protecting.

    you're in my brain, whispering and reassuring with words that should only be meant for intimate lovers, bonded and clean.

    i think i know you.

    and you know me.
  • I wish she could know you now
  • Mind fuck! Good read Medicated-Genius, keep it up! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Time to lay off the medication!

    Seriously... sorta twisted and unnerving. Melikey.
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  • The first stanza is like something outa A Nightmare on Elm Street. I wasn't expecting the prose section in the middle, but it's a very revealing machination of the phych's true intent. So much so, that
    the stanza:

    too young to know
    i had a motive in me
    i showed her my kinda love
    knew she wouldnt see

    almost seemed redundant, and lacked the grotesque visuals of the other stanzas, IMHO.
  • constructive critisism always welcome.


    :)
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