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Medicated-GeniusMedicated-Genius Posts: 359
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
take that kiss back put it on the rack you save for sorry arse cases it's not me never could be would walk on my fingernails a mile for the smooth creamy drippy smile there's this chick she calls it the gagoong and I have my very own star splintered with colour hanging from my ceiling and a shiny new something somewhere close my clothes are old and too loose and I will pick the thread like a scab and watch it bleed steeped a cold bath of potent I dont believe a word of this my veins get tired of getting excited over just a sound......... stoopid
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  • :)


    hi
  • hullo mz pasta lady :)
  • beautiful up there... simply


    ;)
  • shucks, ty

    random thought spew, whoever says purging aint good.

    How's you and yours?
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    Originally posted by Medicated-Genius
    take that kiss back put it on the rack you save for sorry arse cases it's not me never could be would walk on my fingernails a mile for the smooth creamy drippy smile there's this chick she calls it the gagoong and I have my very own star splintered with colour hanging from my ceiling and a shiny new something somewhere close my clothes are old and too loose and I will pick the thread like a scab and watch it bleed steeped a cold bath of potent I dont believe a word of this my veins get tired of getting excited over just a sound......... stoopid

    Medicated Genius I like this type of writing, run ons and loosey goosey.. I like your work, thanks :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • Originally posted by Medicated-Genius
    How's you and yours?


    we are doing really well... thank you :)


    you and yours?
  • Me 'n mine are awesome, thx. :)
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    steam of consciousness!!!!
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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