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AET v. The Porch

The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
edited September 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
My life is falling apart
Posters are important too
I have a drug problem
It sounds better on vinyl
My heart has broken
It is official now
Please play the South
Sometime in April
We will meet again
Where is my single
Fuck, I hate you all
Pics where Ed looks hot
Part 2 no less, but just
I’m a great person
But got too drunk
And fucked someone else
In spite, she kept Buster
Whistled a weary birdy
Unexplained but plentiful
Attended a million shows
Far more than the average
Revealed in my signature
Exactly how happy I am
Faded ink reminds me too
But there is a thread
And I must be seen
'I want to hurry home to you
put on a slow, dumb show for you
and crack you up
so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
god I'm very, very frightening
and I'll overdo it'
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  • Scratchin a LetterScratchin a Letter Posts: 2,303
    Nice!
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This one is cute Champ. :)
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  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    Scratchin a Letter wrote:
    Nice!

    Thanks..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • LizardLizard Posts: 12,091
    I like that


    :)
    So I'll just lie down and wait for the dream
    Where I'm not ugly and you're lookin' at me
  • corycory Posts: 736
    I can't believe you couldn't fit in NYPJ1 and his sexual addiction.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    justam wrote:
    This one is cute Champ. :)

    Fascinating how some can post so effortlessly, whether it is their most intimate feelings/problems or whine about meaningless things...
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    cory wrote:
    I can't believe you couldn't fit in NYPJ1 and his sexual addiction.

    It's in there, along with you and bostonlou's secret romance..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    The Champ wrote:
    Fascinating how some can post so effortlessly, whether it is their most intimate feelings/problems or whine about meaningless things...

    :)
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  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    cory wrote:
    I can't believe you couldn't fit in NYPJ1 and his sexual addiction.

    Apparently, the mods took notice of his addiction and banned him for it...Well, not for his addiction, but for posting something graphically related to it..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    Wow, things don't change much do they? Well, I mean aside from pit members/usernames ;)..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • Dylan StoneDylan Stone Posts: 1,145
    The Champ wrote:
    Wow, things don't change much do they? Well, I mean aside from pit members/usernames ;)..


    EXCELLENT!!

    I love it. :)
  • josevolutionjosevolution Posts: 29,582
    The Champ wrote:
    My life is falling apart
    Posters are important too
    I have a drug problem
    It sounds better on vinyl
    My heart has broken
    It is official now
    Please play the South
    Sometime in April
    We will meet again
    Where is my single
    Fuck, I hate you all
    Pics where Ed looks hot
    Part 2 no less, but just
    I’m a great person
    But got too drunk
    And fucked someone else
    In spite, she kept Buster
    Whistled a weary birdy
    Unexplained but plentiful
    Attended a million shows
    Far more than the average
    Revealed in my signature
    Exactly how happy I am
    Faded ink reminds me too
    But there is a thread
    And I must be seen

    very nice this describes everyone here ,is that really cory wellcome back ..
    jesus greets me looks just like me ....
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    GTFLYGIRL wrote:
    EXCELLENT!!

    I love it. :)

    Same shit, different day..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    josevolution wrote:
    very nice this describes everyone here ,is that really cory wellcome back ..

    No no, I haven't been in this forum in ages..someone reminded me of antiquing earlier today and decided to check some of my older threads..for some odd reason many have disappeared while some seem never to..anyway, I bumped it with this:
    The Champ wrote:
    Wow, things don't change much do they? Well, I mean aside from pit members/usernames ;)..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    The Champ wrote:
    Same shit, different day..

    yep...absofuckinglutely
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • kcherubkcherub Posts: 961
    The only thing missing is some white pants. :)

    Great thoughts.
    I still want you all to "take care"--I am just damn tired of typing it.

    http://www.youtube.com/user/kcherub#p/a/u/0/N-UQprRqSwo
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    Unfortunately the white pants fascination occured way after I wrote this, but the 'Pics where Ed looks hot' and the line following fall in the same category ;)..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • LONGRDLONGRD Posts: 6,036
    lol. nicely done!

    the entire pit has been quiet lately...:(
    PJ- 04/29/2003.06/24,25,27,28,30/2008.10/27,28,30,31/2009
    EV- 08/09,10/2008.06/08,09/2009
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    The Champ wrote:
    Wow, things don't change much do they? Well, I mean aside from pit members/usernames ;)..


    yeah, i don't know who any of you are anymore
    i even forgot what "the pit" was
    we called this poetry page "the hut" when we first got here
    but, now i remember...

    anyways...
  • just tinajust tina Posts: 277
    good job, champ.
    haven't been around here in a long while, and yet you said it all. i guess the faces change but things do stay the same.
  • AnnaMelindaAnnaMelinda Posts: 331
    The Champ wrote:
    Unfortunately the white pants fascination occured way after I wrote this

    thank god for that. :)
    sometimes life don't leave you alone
  • memememe Posts: 4,695
    That was great :)
    ... and the will to show I will always be better than before.
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