Mid-Life Crisis

feathersfeathers Posts: 84
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
"Father, why do your eyes
tear up when you
talk about love?
Is it because when
you were sixteen,
it meant more than
it does now?

"Father, who do you
imagine when you
talk about love?
Was she a
spring break could-have-been,
or was she a
star in your eyes?"

I never get
the courage
to ask my dad
about the past,
and I'll never get
the courage
to tell you
how I feel,

but when all the cigarette burns
have darkened my lungs,
when the hope in my heart
finally fades,
and when I sit with my son
and tell him about love,
will your face be in my mind?

I think it will.
I think it will.

I think it will.

Because you're the latter,
and the former,
and everything in between.
You're the latter,
the former,
and everything in between.
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Comments

  • hsewifhsewif Posts: 444
    I

    love

    this

    poem.
  • :)

    Thank you.
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    This one is good. It really made me stop and think.
  • KovoKovo Posts: 255
    Great poem.
    I shouldn't have to fight a battle I'll never win, just to lose those I've never had.
  • 24 years old, mid-life crisis. nowadays hits you when your young.
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • 24 years old, mid-life crisis. nowadays hits you when your young.

    That's what inspired the title, actually.

    Thanks for the positive feedback. :)
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