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on the spot vol. 2

mookie dmookie d Posts: 43
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
"the last waltz blues"

No wonder Richard Manuel
took matters into his own hands
He was betrayed by a modern day Judas
(Yes, you Robbie)

No one could see
the shape you were in
Maybe because Neil Diamond
was hogging the spotlight

You tried the honkies
and you tried the crackers
shunned marshmellow overcoat
and settled on THE BAND

The piano, the organ,
The slide, or the skins
A master musician that
went unrecognized

So it ended drunk in a
cheap hotel
I wonder if dear Robby cried
when Levon cut you down






Spontaneous. Just like the one up top. That one is called...the gonorrhea blues.
my love for you is ticking clock BERZERKER! would you like some making fuck BERZERKER?!

why will you take by force what you may have quietly by love? - Powhatan
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  • sweet dick
    drunk in a hotel
    alone
    save the latter day saints
    and his innocence

    fall prey to fame
    the love of art
    an achille's heel
    that surely cries wolf
    to the mountain lions
    stalking thier reservations

    somewhere down that crazy river










    "now me and my mate were back at the shack
    playing spike jones on the box
    she said, i can't take the way he sings
    but i love to hear him talk
    and that just made my heart drop
    to the bottom of my feet
    that's when that little sweet thing of mine
    dipped her donut in my tea

    hee hee hee

    we're going up on cripple creek
    that's where she sends me and
    if i spring a leak
    she mends me
    i don't have to speak
    she defends me
    a drunkards dream
    if i ever did see one....



    bown down ooh dow dow doo dee do le doo de doo....


    oh dee lo de oh doh doh..."
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  • hey, i like yours better. I get bummed out every time I watch the last waltz. I have to skip ahead to Van Morrison in that crazy jumpsuit doing those leg kicks. Kudos on the poem.
    my love for you is ticking clock BERZERKER! would you like some making fuck BERZERKER?!

    why will you take by force what you may have quietly by love? - Powhatan
  • van's a nut


    i love The Band, too ~ so you put that little diddy in my head and it's a good one...




    thank YOU (:
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  • oh! and i knew a guy in school named richard sweat...




    no shit...




    i was reading off names and said, "for the love of pete who's parents named them RICHARD SWEAT???"

    he was standing not two feet away from me




    open mouth
    insert foot

















    lol... watch him read this post now, pm me and say, "lifeisworth, when are you going to let it drop???".... lol
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
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