a song of mine/what do you think

daughtersondaughterson Posts: 11
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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i live so far away from here
traveling mountain tops is what i fear
the water is drownding, and i can barely hear
i call out her name but the rain.... it disappears

i'm in search for a soul
for my love that i have

i once heard if you want you need to pray
so i guess i'll pray............
and if i push will you pull me your way
and if i pull will you take it all away

im in search for a soul
for my love that i have
hail, hail, the lucky ones in love
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  • nice
    'Fox hunting is barbaric, the people who do it are a bunch of snobby tories with stupid posh accents. Oh damn, i didn't say that - damn, what a giveaway...'
  • The Wayfarer~

    In the deep shadows of a rainy July
    With secret steps you walk alone,
    Silent as night, eluding all eyes.


    The morning pays no attention to the call of the wind
    A thick veil is thrown over the ever-watchful sky
    And at every house the door is shut
    To the solitary wayfarer on this deserted street.


    Oh, my only friend, my best beloved,
    The gates are open at my house!
    Don't pass me by like a dream.




    Distant Words~

    "You send me love letters in the moon,"
    The night said to the sun.
    "And I leave you my answer
    As tears upon the grass."




    Longing~

    He came and sat by my bed
    But I didn't wake up~
    What a curse it is to sleep!
    O miserable me!


    He came when the night was still
    With his harp in his hands
    And the melodies he played
    Sounded in my dreams.


    Ah, why so I lose my nights?
    Why so I miss the sight of him
    Whose softest breath caressed my sleep?


    RT
  • Originally posted by daughterson
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    i live so far away from here
    traveling mountain tops is what i fear
    the water is drownding, and i can barely hear
    i call out her name but the rain.... it disappears

    i'm in search for a soul
    for my love that i have

    i once heard if you want you need to pray
    so i guess i'll pray............
    and if i push will you pull me your way
    and if i pull will you take it all away

    im in search for a soul
    for my love that i have

    nice, shows promise. reminds me of stuff i wrote when i was younger.
  • It was very visual. It made me feel like I was in water.

    Maybe, the rhythm of it felt like water.

    pretty.
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    awesome


    i will pray i feel like im always in the state
    but when im unconscious in prayer
    its different

    i try to tell myself that all the hours of the day
    im in this state of communication
    with god

    but when i close my eyes and give my heart away
    there is a renewel that i could never explain
    in word
    convicted
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    im scared of the mountain roads
    im scared of decending
    with a heavy load
    im scared of the slickness
    inside my heart it explodes
    cause we wernt made to do this

    way up high the fear builds inside
    sometimes i pull over
    sometimes i hide
    think of many reasons to quit
    to give up
    when giving up
    makes her fly further away


    hey if i can post this when i really shouldnt
    you should too

    im a doctor
    convicted
  • awesome stuff yall
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    bump
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