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Come to my mountain top

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited December 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I want to tell you a thousand words
On my mountain top
It just felt right
Give me one reason to let go
My actions speak louder then words up there
Let me touch you
Wanna feel what I'm feeling?
You have to get closer
Give me your hand
See....that's wasn't soo bad
Walk with me to my mountain
Simple thoughts await us
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • Cree NationsCree Nations Posts: 2,247
    i dont know but for me this seemed a little racey
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    ...a lover and a fighter.
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Cree Nations wrote:
    i dont know but for me this seemed a little racey

    yes, very subtly scandalous.
    .........................................................................
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    This poems about freedom......FOR EVERYONE!!!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,275
    I didn't read it as racey-
    an invitation to touch the sky
    where I see the sky as purely beautiful
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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