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I would give you..

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited July 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Roads to walk
Lips to kiss
Skin soo soft
A loft
for us to live

Water to drink
A will to think
Wishes to my dreams
Laughter for screams

Needs to desires
A forrest
blazes our fire

Calmness of winds
Finding ourselves
with in

Hide to seek
Finding us
Cheek to cheek

Giving you my hand
Lets leave
This foreign land
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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Comments

  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) You can't beat that! The sentiments are just lovely, a poet!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Thanks both of you!!!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    You are very welcome! Since I started reading your poems, I've always enjoyed them. There's just something about them that really touches me! They have this beautiful, feminine, realistic, touching, human quality that I really admire. You are truly a poet! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Poet....
    Very nice and indefinitly romantic!:)
    I think you hit that spot!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Definately one of the finest work I have ever had the pleasure to read....wow
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
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