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Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I drink black coffee
and yes I leave the doors open
I cry at commercials,
and yes I leave the lights on
I'de love to love you
in a rain storm
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    a poet...firstly, your sig is one of my absolute favorite chinks of a PJ song...that is too cool. now I want it as my sig!

    the poem blew me away...so self-affirming, non-apologetic. and for the end, such a confident statement of longing. I feel as though you are letting us know you with this poem.
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    wow, what an unfortunate error...I mean "chunks" not "chinks"
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I think thats a sweet poem:):):):):):):):):):):):):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    This poem is me at the moment.. in love, but society won't let us
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    why won't society let you?


    hail hail the lucky ones...
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  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    I'm falling in love with another women
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    ahhhh...well, society may not let you get married, but we seem to be coming around to the idea that you might not be evil. :)

    good luck to you. I know it can be a difficult thing.
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  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    It's a weird situation, also cause I'm married
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    a poet wrote:
    It's a weird situation, also cause I'm married

    wow. quite a situation indeed. what do you think you should do?
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  • shiftlesslayaboutshiftlesslayabout Posts: 20
    this poem is an amazing short burst of raw power
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Love is for who you feel it with-25-7.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • christmascleanlovechristmascleanlove Posts: 21
    i feel for ya, poet. i've been in some similar situations. your poem is a tremendous representation of my own emotions in such a situation.

    hang in there!
    i can still bite my toenails.
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Love can be soo good, but when it hurts, it really hurts
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
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