Some Feelin

Righteous Jammer

I'm all wet,
with rain.
I'm wind blown,
by your hurricane.
I'm speechless,
by the sight of your smile.
I'm froze,
by our conversation.

Night falls,
and I'm still starstuck.
In your world,
of the unknown.
This is some feelin.

Ali

Nice supernatural edge mixed in with the personification of the elements in a way.:)
Good going Ms. Poet!
allison:)

ISN

simple words....classic, timeless words.....all joined together to make a lovely peom......:)

Being Enlightened

I like how you've humanized the elements in this poem, a poet, ie. "I'm wind blown, by your hurricane"---this line reminds me of that Neil Young song, "you are like a hurricane, there's calm in youir eyes...". This is great!