A cactus tree, being free

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A sunflower
on a cold winters day
untouched, overlooked
that's how I pictured you.

A cactus tree
on a rainy day
sharp,full of bloom
that's how I pictured you.

An ocean
on high tide
calm, open minded
that's how I pictured you.

A long walk
on a soft October night
cold streets, warm hearts
that's how I pictured us...........
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I love the feeling in this. Pure love. :)
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  • Thank you~ I was hoping I could get down on paper what I was seeing and feeling in my soul and heart
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    a poet wrote:
    Thank you~ I was hoping I could get down on paper what I was seeing and feeling in my soul and heart

    :)
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  • a poet wrote:
    Thank you~ I was hoping I could get down on paper what I was seeing and feeling in my soul and heart

    a poet, I can't wait until all the leaves turn and the air gets that chill....*shivers* :)

    Your soul, your heart, your beautiful words reflected them perfectly! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Thank you~ you are too kind~
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
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