One Day I watched in the city

Righteous Jammer

One day I watched
Everything go by as the sun arrives
Silently I sing the blues

I have to pick myself up from this park bench
My feet feel soo heavy today
Why can't love stay?
It always has somewhere else to go

So, I think I feel for you...
As darkness fall in the city.
An empty apartment is waiting for my return
My feet can't walk slow enough.

sevensins

a poet wrote:

An empty apartment is waiting for my return
My feet can't walk slow enough.

nice line, creates a good visual. nice work poet

casper leblanc

I just imagined myself doing what you wrote, while I was reading it. Simple, but very beautiful and effective. Moody. Less is more, as they say.


'Silently I sing the blues' --> absolutely beautiful line

Righteous Jammer

Thank you for your kind words. It's very encouraging to keep writing..