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rain is coming

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Tears stream down your face,
I promise,
I will....
wipe them away
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • kevinbeetlekevinbeetle Posts: 358
    Very nice. Reminds me of Coldplay's Fix You
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    simple, yet fleetingly beautiful :)

    ('and a hard rain's gonna fall')
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    This was more of a morning thought then a poem..feel free to add on to it..
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    a poet wrote:
    Tears stream down your face,
    I promise,
    I will....
    wipe them away

    A smile I wish would replace,
    I promise,
    I will...
    have jokes to say

    Please find comfort at my place,
    I promise,
    I will...
    love you all day

    :) Thanks, a poet!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I too enjoyed your thoughts. Very comforting.
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    I love everyones words on this board.. They always have made my day.....
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Nice poem,poet.
    You are so good at writing simple,one or two liners.
    I'd love to see them in a book......
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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