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Your Unkindness

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited December 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
You gave me a camera
with no film
You gave me water
with no glass
You gave me an ocean
with no waves
You gave me love
with no heart
You can have mine
Take it, please.
I'm done with it
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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Comments

  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    an interesting....devouring....poem.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    i just had to sit back and soak that one in

    great poem!
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    blistered hands
    even a broken wheelbarrow
    can move compost
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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