Hurting my sandcastle heart, again

Righteous Jammer
Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited December 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It's like a heavy tide
on my eggshell shoreline
I cant make this sandcastle by myself
Without you, It won't stick together
My skin is covered in rough sand
Dry emotions, ruin my creation
Here comes the storm warning
Feels like a heavy rain on my wind blown face
Wish the waves would bring you closer
It's such a helpless feeling
You out there with the ocean's calmness
Me, at the shore
Slowly losing sight of you
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I dig it. Nice imagery. Brilliantly conveyed emotion.


    ps...I used to have the end of Ghost as my sig also!! That's one of the coolest lyrics ever!
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  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,389
    summer rain
    a broken sand bucket
    a fallen flag
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Righteous Jammer
    Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Thanks for the input!
    I agree grooveamatic, best lyric by Pearl Jam. Boy, does it hit home for me.
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    your reticence shall not continue!!!! hehehehehe.....spout forth to teh multitudes and they will listen.....(even if they don't, I will)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......

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