Season's emotions

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
I compare your hair to the summer's breeze,
warm and delicate.

I compare your smile to the winter's snow,
cool and kind.

I compare your eyes to the spring leaves,
changing with emotion.
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • miller8966miller8966 Posts: 1,450
    thats pretty good
    America...the greatest Country in the world.
  • Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
    Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
    Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
    And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
    Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
    And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
    And every fair from fair sometime declines,
    By chance, or nature's changing course untrimmed:
    But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
    Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st,
    Nor shall death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
    When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st,
    So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,
    So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Shakes was the first thing I thought of, too...

    Who can deny the power of that particular sonnet?
    .........................................................................
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Sweet piece,once again,poet;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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