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Timed Emotions

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Hours bruise me
Minutes make me bleed
Seconds will kill me...

Please add on...
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    a poet wrote:
    Hours bruise me
    Minutes make me bleed
    Seconds will kill me...

    Please add on...
    u mean...add a comment or continue the poem?
    i loved what i read...
    really powerfull...
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    add on to the poem.... my mind went blank
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Moments mesmorize....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    as the black hand flies by
    timeless and ever watching
    smirking with numbered eyes
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    years roll through my face
    as the tides of my skin
    caress the wrinkled shoals of my eyes
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