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Old fashioned sun beam

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited May 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
There was a time
when the sun shined.
It would shine all day
make us behaving
in an old fashioned way.

There was a time
when we could play.
Say goodbye to those
rainy days.
Hello to,
old fashioned sun beams

The beams lighted up your face.
Just for a moment,
to go back to that place.

Oh to go back to that place~
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I like this one! :)
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    This is sweet and dreamy...I rather like sunbeams :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    It came to me after looking into a sun and missing someone by your side~
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    a poet wrote:
    It came to me after looking into a sun and missing someone by your side~

    :) "Oh to go back to that place~" :) Oh yes, indeed! So nice to see some sweetness from you, a poet.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • burtschipsburtschips Posts: 734
    I like the feeling of it, seems languid but spirited to me.
    Salut baloo
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I rather enjoyed that
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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