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Poem of the day

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited May 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Let the red burn down its thread
as it shows its last light.
It was given, now it's gotten
on to be the night.
I giggle to myself like I used to when I was young.
I'm so happy to be here and right now a witness--
I saw the sun!
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannntastic!
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  • asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
    i like it ... no considerations except for a nice mood ...
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Couldnt think of a title.
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    plus you saw the sun

    the last moment of the day before the night came on.

    a great little poem for that last great little moment of a day.

    I think "poem of the day" is actually a very fitting, appropriate perfect title!
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