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My Place

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Feeling tired
Need to sleep
Thoughts of you
Dance in my head
So deep

I lie awake
Look up at the sky
It's finally time
To tell you, goodbye

I see a full moon
Staring me in the face
I think I've finally found
My place
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Nice poem....I like the rhyming:)
    and the theme.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Thank you for your kind words
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
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