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Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited May 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Cars travel away
Feet walk to fast
Mouths lose their smile
Ears hear to much
My heart feels like rain to a desert
Breaking for you
with each drop
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • dark_crystalisdark_crystalis Posts: 23
    I liked it except for the fact that its way too short for my liking....
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I liked it.Reminds me of being at work, walking in the rain with 1,000 thoughts of love encircling my brain.
    Smooth work.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Words never listenWords never listen Posts: 46
    I love it

    I don't think its too short...
    How can I forget your tender smile
    Moments that I have shared with you
    Our hearts may break
    But they're on their way
    And there's nothing I can do
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