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Ghost in my wine

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i cant drink anymore
all i see is reflection
its you
in my glass
your ghost

filled me up
the most
its was just
my wine
thank you god
its a sign
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Very well written POet....
    You and your wine are a match we can't separate...
    Writing about your wine is very true to you.....:)
    Very Nice....
    PS Did Jim write about wine? ;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    best poem I've read in a good while. thanks poet.
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  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Jim basically wrote about drinking in general
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    a poet wrote:
    Jim basically wrote about drinking in general
    He was a typical poet in distress,eh?
    Well...not to me....:)
    I write WHEN i'm drinking.....:) (sometimes....)

    xxx-ooo,
    ali:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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