Natures Way

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I was on my way.
Kicking the pebbles,
be a rebel.
Not noticing the speed of the wind.
It's shifting towards the east.
Leaves were dancing at my feet.
Branches started waving their hands,
pushing me away from this foreign land.
Saying their final goodbyes.

I was on my way.
The ocean silently whispers in my ear,
ride this wave out of here.
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Nice poet.
    I can relate.
    I cant wait to get my rear end outta this house that I dont own and find where my true heart and soul lies.:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    a poet wrote:
    I was on my way.
    Kicking the pebbles,
    be a rebel.
    Not noticing the speed of the wind.
    It's shifting towards the east.
    Leaves were dancing at my feet.
    Branches started waving their hands,
    pushing me away from this foreign land.
    Saying their final goodbyes.

    I was on my way.
    The ocean silently whispers in my ear,
    ride this wave out of here.

    this is great, one of my faves i have read.
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • VEDHEAD27VEDHEAD27 Posts: 3,091
    Awesome! I really feel this one.

    a poet wrote:

    I was on my way.
    The ocean silently whispers in my ear,
    ride this wave out of here.


    One hell of an ending! Love it.


    VERY nice a poet. Thanks for sharing. :)
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