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Is this real?

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
No one knows how I feel,
But the love is real.

No one knows how I see,
Just the thought of you and me.

No one understands what I say,
Though I say it day-by-day.

No one knows how I am,
Like no one knows my little plan.

I am who I want to be,
And no one's going to change me.

No one cares what I think,
But I see you in every blink.

You are so close, yet so far
And together, I hope we are
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • burtschipsburtschips Posts: 734
    Is the love reciprocated poet? It reminds me a bit of a mantra, I think.
    Salut baloo
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Very sentimental poet....

    I think I know your plan.:)To drink a lot of wine!!!!!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Very nice, a poet! :) I like how it reads and rhymes.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Lets drink some wine then Ali!!!!!!!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    You got it poet.but I drank my last little bottle of Sutter Home a week ago!!!
    I must go to the store!!!!!!!:);)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    No Need For That.. I Have Plently Of Wine Of All My People!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I dont mind dry red wine, but I prefer a stiff rye :)

    nice job poem.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    I'm not usually touched by many romantic poems, but I like how you offset your deepest thoughts with the love you are experiencing...or have experienced.

    This poem is truly beautiful. Probably my favorite that I've seen from you.
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