Charmaine

Righteous Jammer

She was caught
in the moment of Chardonnay,
passing through rooms
like six o'clock sunlight,
bonded to Italian crystal
that kissed her madly.

She swayed over the sweetness
of teeth
and
lips
and tongue tips,
and the currents
of pressed rivers
that travelled from her goblet

twin2

Wow. That was really good. Good descriptions.

Ali

a poet wrote:

She was caught
in the moment of Chardonnay,
passing through rooms
like six o'clock sunlight,
bonded to Italian crystal
that kissed her madly.

She swayed over the sweetness
of teeth
and
lips
and tongue tips,
and the currents
of pressed rivers
that travelled from her goblet

Very very very interesting poet.Nicely done.Been drinking much wine lately;)?

Righteous Jammer

But of course, Ali.. I was drunk off wine when I wrote this one!