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Righteous Jammer

Righteous Jammer Posts: 509

September 2005 edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art

I overcooked your words
Your reaction was overheated
Guess I mixed the wrong ingredients.......
Or forgot to preheat your oven's emotion

It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost

Post edited by Unknown User on September 2005

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Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746

September 2005

That was cool, a poet!

Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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twin2 Posts: 894

September 2005

That one made me smile.

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hsewif Posts: 444

September 2005

It reminded me of this:

http://forums.pearljam.com/showpost.php?p=2060302&postcount=1

What are poems like these called?

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Righteous Jammer Posts: 509

September 2005

thanks everyone...feel free to add some more emotion to it!!

It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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