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Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
She grew up in the windy side of town
Never knew how to settle down.....
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    a poet wrote:
    She grew up in the windy side of town
    Never knew how to settle down.....
    She turned in circles covering miles
    dust covered her lips fixated in smiles.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    She wound through each soul, spinning every core
    sandblown kisses left them wanting so much more...
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    That was beautiful.....exactly what I was thinking....I just couldnt put into words....
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    Do another do another!!!!
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    another....

    do you remember the day
    even though its gone away
    do you remember the thrill
    and does it bring on a chill
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    a poet wrote:
    She grew up in the windy side of town
    Never knew how to settle down.....


    Til' the day the stranger blew in with the wind
    A new life she was about to begin


    Or

    Til' a stranger stole her heart
    She looks lovely in that gown
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    depopulationINC wrote:
    do you remember the day
    even though its gone away
    do you remember the thrill
    and does it bring on a chill
    when washerroom patrons struted in silk
    and counted the number of fires,
    when circus performers were forced from the cage
    to view the crumbling of a sweet baby's mountain
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    I wish I could bath
    in your fountain.
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    a poet wrote:
    I wish I could bath
    in your fountain.
    i WISH YOUR FOUNTAIN
    WAS FULL OF
    MY TEARS OF JOY.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Ali wrote:
    i WISH YOUR FOUNTAIN
    WAS FULL OF
    MY TEARS OF JOY.
    I wish your joy
    was my being.
    I wish your being
    was my life.
    I wish my life
    was your death.
    I wish your death
    was my birth.
    I wish your birth
    was my end.
    I wish my end
    was your beginning.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    very Jim Morrison, Ali!!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    a poet wrote:
    very Jim Morrison, Ali!!
    Poet...."S"...
    I have this video vhs tape..THe DOORS-DANCE ON FIRE.
    You should see the amazing video clips of Jimmy during his days.
    he is absolutely amazing.
    Not to mention the video for LA WOMAN.I think manzerek put it together.
    I'll send it to you if you want to watch it...just make sure you send it back!!!!!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    Ali wrote:
    I wish your joy
    was my being.
    I wish your being
    was my life.
    I wish my life
    was your death.
    I wish your death
    was my birth.
    I wish your birth
    was my end.
    I wish my end
    was your beginning.
    half the man walking in pink bows
    looks up at her reflection bearded.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Hey Ali....I actually have the footage as well.. Thanks for the offer though... Your right its truely amazing of Jim!!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
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